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Tuesday, November 13, 2007

24 years...."of beautiful flight!"

*warning - If you are allergic to confessions of 'love' please skip this page*


Tonight
I sneaked out of bed
when I thought you have fallen asleep
....because I wanted to write
something special, something sweet
"Happy anniversary darling.....
......24 years of bliss, and still counting...!"
I google'd for love poems
I looked for you-tube songs
but in the end
I settled for words of my own
"Happy Anniversary dearest....
....thank you for the most wonderful 24 years!"
Tonight, on the eve of our anniversary
I recall - it all began in the summer of nineteen eighty
You accepted my invitation to a circus
we walked the sea front of Portsmouth
like two swans in flight
we felt - being together was just right
we let ocean breeze wiped away our worries
for together, we were free and happy
spreading our wings...
trusting our feelings....
Twenty four years ago today
you were a young and shy bride
I was a lucky man filled with pride
we started our journey - oh, what a flight!~
Tears and laughter, and occassional fights
Trust and Forgiveness, an eternal soul-mates.
Twenty four years that have passed
accumulated memories which made us, us
of fullfilled promises, and undying dreams
of unified wishes for a beautiful ending
of seeing till the end - what we started as friends
through thick and thin -we will share what life brings.
Through all these years, I have known to be true
- It doesn't matter where I go in life…or what I do
Or how much I have...whether it is red or blue
I am most happy when I am with you ! -
Please hang on tight - be with me
for the best....is yet to be
let us find joy in continue flying
for another twenty four years - with all of life's blessings.
I can keep on writing....turning words into poems
but I'd rather rejoin you in bed....sharing in your dreams
With a gentle kiss, let me wish you
"Happy anniversary darling - My love is true!"
*If you managed to read this far and still feel pretty ok - thank you for participating in celebrating our little anniversary jubilation*

80 comments:

  1. oh my god..uncle this is sooo super sweet. i even shed some tears at the end. sweet gila gila gila ok!!!!!!

    tersentuh hati dan perasaan mcm menonton cerita grey's anatomy..ahhhh saya suka perasaan itu.


    Selamat anniversary to u both ( i dont know how to wish anniversary to ppl) congrats for the blessful 24years together..and the year to come.. hope to see u guys some day..a very happy lovely couple which i adore eventhough i dont know u that much. hahah. u just..inspired me alot!

    oh selamat celebrating the anniversary too! :D

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  2. Dear uncle & auntie.

    Happy 24th anniversary. Tersentuh sgt2 bila abis baca confessions of love ni. Tetiba aje terlintas sebuah lagu...

    I Want To Spend My Lifetime Loving You - Marc Anthony ft. Tina Arena

    -zuha-

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  3. To Id n Kak Lil...

    Moga ikatan ini berkekalan hingga ke akhir hayat dan disirami dgm mawaddah dan rahmah, serta diberkatiNYA....

    HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!!!!!!!!!

    mr & mrs ays....

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  4. This is so sweet of you... is true when you loves someone deeply, and someone loved you truly... the end is superb

    " Lady, I’m your knight in shining armor and I love you
    You have made me what I am and I am yours. My love, there’s so many ways I want to say I love you
    Let me hold you in my arms forever more - Lady Lionel Richie"

    Happy Anniversary

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  5. Salam Idham,
    Happy Anniversary. Semoga Tuan dan Puan terus menikmati kehidupan bersama yang diRahmati.

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  6. I wonder how long did you leave KLil to write up these words. There shouldn't be any sneaking around pun tonite.. should be 'celebrating' your love' ;P

    Anyway, 24 years is an achievement. Congratulations. And I wish you more happy years together.

    Happy anniversary Abg. Arief and KLil

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  7. sungguh indah, membayang ketelusan dan keikhlasan, inilah kurniaan Allah SWT, syukur padaNya dan tahniah.Semoga mendapat rahmat dan diberkati hidup mu bersama.

    Keep it up!

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  8. 'Happy Anniversary'to both of u..Semoga Lebih Berbahagia di hari-hari yang mendatang....lebih romantik lagi kut.

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  9. maak aii! abg id...!
    tak terkata!!

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  10. second jengae.. this is so super schweettt..

    to abg id & kak Lil.. happy anniversary.. ku doakan kalian berbahagia selamanyaaa..

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  11. Happy Anniversary Abg Id and Kak Lil...Semoga mendapat lebih limpah kurnia rahmat dan berkat serta berada di dalam perlindungan Allah sentiasa...Amin.

    Tersentuh hati membaca karangan sajak abg Id tu... Tu yg romantik bukan hanya pada kata-kata yang terlontar tapi dari sentuhan perasaan juga... Beruntung Kak Lil, you!

    Take care both of you and cheers!

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  12. Awww.... so sweet..... Happy Anniversary Abe Id n Kak Lil. Semoga bersatu selamanya. Eh! tahun depan leh sambut Jubli perak la yer?

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  13. 24 tahun? tu diaaaa..lama wehh...i nak stay in a relationship for few months pun dah tersemput2..

    congrats..!

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  14. Happy Anniversary to Id and Kak Lil, or should it be Abg Id. Wah quiet dinner tonite?

    My salam to Kak Lil.

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  15. Allergic? I am getting HIVES!

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  16. YES! YES! I'M HAPPY FOR BOTH OF YOU.. HAPPY ANNIVERSARY.. AND HOPEFULLY MANY MORE ANNIVERSARIES TO COME...

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  17. Kak Lil and abg Id,

    Happy 24th anniverary, u guys are super duper sweet!

    Reminds me of a song by indie arie-can i walk with u

    Happy celebrating and to many more blissful years to come!!!

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  18. Idham and Kak Lil (hurm...dah panggil "kak" Lil, kenalah panggil u "Abg" Idham ek... )

    Tahniah...Semoga Allah akan melimpahkan lagi keRahmatan dan KeberkatanNya ke atas anda berdua, dan semoga Allah akan terus membuka hati kalian untuk memberi dan menerima kasih sayang yg melimpah ruah, utk diri sendiri, suami/isteri dan anak2, utk saudara-mara seIslam, utk sahabat handai dan seluruh umat Islam di dunia ini.
    Ameen.

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  19. Happy Anniversary ke 24,untuk Ariff dan Aisyah, Semoga berkekalan dan beroleh kebahagiaan yang berpanjangan.

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  20. hahaha, when i start reading ususally i will finish it no matter how bad it is...LOL! just kidding! that is such a beautiful piece. here's a toast to many more wonderful years to come :)
    happy anniversary to you both.

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  21. Happy Anniversary to both of you! Your poem is soooo nice... I wish I could write like you someday.. That's why I keep on reading your blog (addicted already, actually!) Hehehe...

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  22. Aaaawwwwhhh...that was just so sweet.
    Happy 24th Anniversary!

    Here's to another glorious and joyous 24 years and MANY, MANY MORE, insya Allah...Amin.

    P/S : May I suggest the song "Tercipta Untukku" by Ungu for you to dedicate to Kak LiL... It will definitely melt her heart.

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  23. encik id dan pn id, happy anniversary. happy 4 u both and insyaallah, He will bless u 2 with more love.

    scared that u might nolonger share yr beautiul stories with yr 'peminat' anymore...now m very glad...

    p/s: i have a girl who has just turned 18 last week...hehehehe...jgn coba2, mak dia garang!

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  24. Pak Payne,
    This is simply awesome. BEAUTIFUL dedication to Kak LiL. Both of you are clearly made for each other.
    Happy Anniversary to both of you. Many Happy Moments... more.
    I'm having goosebumps just reading this entry (and I'm really in trouble, man, for our anniversary is coming up too and I still don't have any idea on what to post. Aaargh.

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  25. Abg Id dan Kak Lil,

    Happy anniversary! :)

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  26. Happy 24th anniversary to Id and kak Lil.

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  27. Oh Abg Id, such sweet words. Cair ok? Nak nangis pun ada..Kak Lil is so lucky! Happy anniversary to you both! 24 years eh? Amy baru nak merangkak ke 4th anniversary.. and it is exactly one month after yours. Banyak coincidence kan? Your son's birthday 3rd Nov, me 4th Nov..:D

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  28. Abang Id,

    Go on, write all u want coz u know she'll read them and we'll share those joyful feelings!

    May many more anniversaries to come, u and kak lil and may the love requited, rejoiced and relived over and over again despite whatever shortcomings and tiny bickerings.

    And may u continue to inspire many of us that romance can be everlasting for those who really cherish each other with open heart and mind come what may. God speed and bless you both to the eternity.

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  29. Abg Id & Kak Lil,

    Congrats on your 24th anniversary...here's to many more to come...

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  30. adus...romantika d'amour betul la si idham ni...ahaks! mesti tersipu2 malu kak lil tu...woo hoo hoo. she must be one heck of a lady!

    congratulations to idham & his lovely wife on their wedding anniversary. 24 thn tu mcm dah suku abad tuh!

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  31. Hi Idham,

    Wishing both you and Lil

    'HAPPY 24TH WEDDING ANNIVERSARY'

    I'm sure Lil will be touched by your gesture.


    Take care and salam to Lil.

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  32. happy anniversary to the lovey-dovey couple of the year!! may it be in barakah always..

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  33. That is truly beautiful... Wishing both you Happy 24th Anniversary and a whole lot more anniversaries to come!

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  34. wow! it's so sweet! happy anniversary!

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  35. Happy Anniversary to Abg Id & K Lil!!!

    Whoa... 24 years and still going on strong lovey dovey. Bagus nya...

    Reminds me of one decorative kitchen magnet that I have on my fridge now which says; "Grow old with me... the best is yet to come".

    Salam...

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  36. Happy Anniversay!

    Wish that my husband could write a poem for me like this!

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  37. Another day
    Without your smile
    Another day just passes by
    But now I know
    How much it means
    For you to stay
    Right here with me

    The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger


    I wanna grow old with you
    I wanna die lying in your arms
    I wanna grow old with you
    I wanna be looking in your eyes
    I wanna be there for you
    Sharing everything you do
    I wanna grow old with you

    A thousand miles between us now
    It causes me to wonder how
    Our love tonight remains so strong
    It makes our risk right all along

    The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger


    I wanna grow old with you
    I wanna die lying in your arms
    I wanna grow old with you
    I wanna be looking in your eyes
    I wanna be there for you
    Sharing everything you do
    I wanna grow old with you

    Things can come and go I know but
    Baby I believe
    Something's burning strong between us
    Makes it clear to me

    I wanna grow old with you
    I wanna die lying in your arms
    I wanna grow old with you
    I wanna be looking in your eyes
    I wanna be there for you
    Sharing everything you do
    I wanna grow old with you


    mogo mogo hidup abe id n kak lil bahagio sokmo , happy sokmo ..

    dan paling penting 'wongi sokmo'

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  38. jengae ,

    ah, thank you ... your tears shed - are tears from a heart filled with love...
    and love is such a nice feeling indeed....:)

    -
    idham

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  39. WAN ZUHA ISHAK ,

    that is such sweet song you have dedicated to us...thanks!

    idham

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  40. ays_as, ..

    yes, mr and mrs ays, urs is a love story which I have followed from start till now...and I wish you both a joyful flight, beautiful scenes along the way...and a love nest filled with God's blessings.

    best wishes,

    id

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  41. Girl Interrupted,

    hehehe....wow, that is one of my feverit songs..thanks!
    yes...for what is a beautiful beginning without a beautiful ending?

    idham

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  42. Zabs,
    terima kasih Zabs...:-)
    LOVE is a verb....has to work at it all the time hehehehe..

    idham

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  43. k.d,

    hehehe....the sneaking was after celebration lah hehehe *blush*
    thanks for the greetings...
    we look forward to end of january, when we will hosting u and family!

    ab arif

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  44. ann ,

    terimakasih....semua yang ada, yang d lihat dan d rasa, datangnya dari Dia jua...:-)

    best wishes to u too!

    idham

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  45. Azian Hasan,

    :-) thank you for the greetings...
    romance is like nice when it happens naturally ....bagaikan air di kali, jernih dan aliran nya mengikut rentak tebing dan lurah...jika di paksa, maka keruh lah air!

    idham

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  46. anamiraa,
    hehehe anamiraa....kata jer!

    best wishes.

    abg id

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  47. pinat,

    dan...ku ameeenkan doamu...tenkiu tenkiu...semoga pinat juga berbahgia seadanya!
    :-)

    abg id

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  48. Raden Galoh,

    Tenkiu raden. kata2 ...tidak dapat menggambarkan kasih sayang d hati...heheheh...:-)
    we are both beruntung kut....dah ada enam anak yang sehat2!thank you for the greetings..

    idham

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  49. dlt ,

    aha tahun depan jubilee perak...hehehe...rasa macam nak naik pelaim lagik sekali bersama kak lil....insyAAllah jika ada rezki....hehehe.....
    sudi kah hadir sebagai tetamu ?

    idham

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  50. AphroditeKuzz ,

    tenkiu kuzz....the hardest part s to get started. Once in motion....follow the flow...with understanding, give n take, and lots of loving...boleh tu...best wishes!
    :-)

    idham

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  51. ummi,

    quiet dinner...quiet time together...away from computer and internet for a couple of days and night hehehhe....it was bliss!

    thanks for the greetings.

    idham

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  52. Mummy Rizq ,

    thanks mumy rizq....i too hope all the angels will be with us in saying....aMeeeenn to ur doa!

    idham

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  53. Yours Truly ,

    thanks...that is a nice song....!

    we are still teh same two persons we met 24 years ago...hehehe....
    masih berdating2 gitu..

    idham

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  54. nurazzah8 ,

    Thank you azzah....doa kami semoga ibadah haji azzah d terimah Allah...perjalanan yg selamat dan mudah....

    after 24 years, kami tak bertukar pun....masih juga seperti zaman dating2 dulu...hehehehe

    idham

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  55. Mama Rock ,

    thanks mama...hehehe, good or bad, so long as you enjoy it...i would say, Go for it mama!@

    idham

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  56. juwaidah,
    walala....but why i can't go into ur blog? rahsia ye....hehehe

    best wishes.

    idham

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  57. WANSHANA ,
    lagu tu kan..memang klasik gitu kan...terciptA untuk ku....yes, i like!

    idham

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  58. Suria Kelang,

    InsyaAllah....we do need His blessings and compassion in all we do...

    baru 18 hehe...kami ada teruna...sesuai tu for kenal-kenalkan...:-)

    idham

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  59. Mior Azhar,
    Pak Mior,

    bila tu urs tu? hehee..nanti akan ada lah kata kata....
    yang lebih penting, isteri tau apa yg pakmior maksudkan...walaupun hanya dgn renungan mata...:P

    idham

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  60. noha chomel,

    yes, thanks....anniversary ni just a date je kan.....walhal kasih sayang kita setiap masa...sepanjang tahun....:)

    idham

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  61. anggerik merah ,

    terima kasih...masih d jakarta?

    idham

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  62. Amy ,

    wah...memang byk kan co incidence...nanti abg id nak join sama2 rai kan ur anniversary ke 4 ye....
    slowly slowly....suburkan kasih sayang suami isteri...menjadi taman indah....:-)

    idham

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  63. Amy ,

    wah...memang byk kan co incidence...nanti abg id nak join sama2 rai kan ur anniversary ke 4 ye....
    slowly slowly....suburkan kasih sayang suami isteri...menjadi taman indah....:-)

    idham

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  64. Manal ,

    romance ...is a combination of preserving the usual ...the norms...and at the same taking chances with new discoveries....little surprises, act silly witn each other, create moments of laughter...accumulaet memories....ermm....and of course, knowing all the time - no matter what - love is forever!

    idham

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  65. Shirin ,

    thanks Yin....your greetings from across the continents made our anniversary even more special...:-)

    idham

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  66. kc ,

    ehehehe...di sana apa kurangnya....seharusnya romantika fantastica jugak tu...cuma berahsia eh...:P

    idham

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  67. ruby ahmad,

    THANK YOU RUBY....LiL appreciates all the greetings too..:-)

    idham

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  68. D ,

    Thanks D....appreciates your visit and greetings ...take care!

    idham

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  69. aurora^^ ,

    thanks aurora...appreciates your visit and greetings...

    idham

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  70. IBU,..
    siapa yang belikan the fridge magnet tu....nice!

    thanks forur greetings IBU...

    may tomorrow be better than yesterday.

    idham

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  71. Salina,
    may u have a wonderful journey in ur life....enjoy the scenes you see....smell the roses...
    best wishes.

    idham

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  72. pB ,

    hehehe....panjae lagu tuh....kalu pB nanyi sedighi lagi beh tu...

    terima kasih deh atah ucapae tu...semoga Pb PUNG heppi sokmo deh...

    :-)

    idhae

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  73. Abe Id & Kak Lil :o)

    I hope I'm not too late in wishing you both -

    Happy Anniversary!

    Do not look at 24 years in terms of time but as a worthwhile journey of beautiful memories & loving, and more to create.

    We could only hope to make it as long as you have & many more years together.

    What's your 'our song'? :o)

    psst ... share la petua2 abe id & kak lil :o)

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  74. syana...:)

    tenkiu...a greetings is never too late...

    'our songs' bertukar mengikut masa...hehehe....

    'petua' x de pun...cuma mungkin...the word itself tu ada rahsia kut...PET and TUA tu yg jadikan PETUA hehehehe.

    PET sampai ke TUA....!

    idham

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  75. happy anniversary..

    maaf keretapi jam..lambat sampai!

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